I liked your pitch. I believe that you structured your pitch in this way: You established a personal connection (how you are also a vegetarian), then you identified your target audience (vegetarians and their average age), and then you focused on the problem recognition, which is eating gelatin and other products that may or may not be vegetarian on accident. Perhaps one thing you could improve is to be more dynamic by standing up and doing the pitch that way. I found that your explanation of the app was very efficient. You explained how it works and in what situations somebody might use it. That’s how you underscored its usefulness. The augmented reality feature seems really fun to use.
Hi Kyleigh,
ReplyDeleteI liked your pitch. I believe that you structured your pitch in this way: You established a personal connection (how you are also a vegetarian), then you identified your target audience (vegetarians and their average age), and then you focused on the problem recognition, which is eating gelatin and other products that may or may not be vegetarian on accident.
Perhaps one thing you could improve is to be more dynamic by standing up and doing the pitch that way.
I found that your explanation of the app was very efficient. You explained how it works and in what situations somebody might use it. That’s how you underscored its usefulness. The augmented reality feature seems really fun to use.